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Old Guy
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posted 05-06-2002 10:46 PM     Profile for Old Guy   Author's Homepage     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Been working on this one for a couple of days. Time to see how it strikes you.

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Victory Vision

Dust claws skyward,
gun smoke rolls out gray and flat.
Shrill screams of horse,
dry-mouth shouts of men fill the iron air.

He smells heated guns,
tastes burned powder and raw blood.
Guts and brains spilled,
fear and sweat mixed, unequally.

These things he knows
of a hundred fights on bitter, barren plains.
He can see and not go mad,
as grass grows and wind blows.

Above his victory ridge,
white clouds worship their sire, the sun.
Cloud mist washes away,
fading into lines of men in dirty blue.

Over the low mountains,
march endless columns of infantry.
Phantoms of dust and smoke,
blown to sudden rags on the wild wind.

Crazy Horse wheels away,
driving the vision from his heart.
Thumping his horse,
he heads south, toward the spatter of distant rifle fire.

He speaks to the clean sky,
‘We cannot kill them fast enough.
‘New soldiers spring up
like green prairie grass pressed under my pony’s foot.’


© JR Hume, 2002


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Rodger Bilko
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posted 05-07-2002 04:30 AM     Profile for Rodger Bilko   Author's Homepage     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Excellent work Jim


Thank you.

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Donster
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posted 05-07-2002 06:19 AM     Profile for Donster   Author's Homepage     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote

Donster

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"Its a dog eat dog world out there, and I'm wearing Milkbone underwear!"


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VMF-124_Gramps
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posted 05-07-2002 08:09 AM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
As always, excellent work.
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Old Guy
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posted 05-07-2002 04:49 PM     Profile for Old Guy   Author's Homepage     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Thanks. I'm still working on it.

Jim


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posted 05-07-2002 04:53 PM       Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote
Gramps said it


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The Quiet Man
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posted 05-07-2002 05:50 PM     Profile for The Quiet Man   Author's Homepage     Send New Private Message   Edit/Delete Post   Reply With Quote

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"En boca cerrada, no entran moscas".


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